Shadowfang son of Earthfang

[ShadowFang]

ShadowFang son of EarthFang

Main Information;; The Known

xx Nicknames

 Fang, Time Lord

xx Age / Birthday

17/winter

xx Gender

male

xx Kingdom / Providence

Crystal

xx Occupation

knight

xx Society / Group

justice

xx Rank/Class

knight

xx Weapons

"Elucidator is a pitch black sword, evenly balanced and quite powerful. It has a black handle connected to a hand guard that is longer on the right side. Attached to this elongated area of the hand-guard is part of Elucidator's obsidian blade so as to better aid the user in retaining their grip on the sword when it is being used. The blade is completely black like the rest of the sword and said blade is outlined in a Light gray. A small cross is embroidered on the flat of the blade under the tip." (from sword art online wiki)

xx Magic

The ability to control time in to a degree and walk through it in five minute intervals. His limit with his ability is that eve though his ability lasts right now with the span of five minutes it is that of a freeze frame that he may maintain this and move around not interacting with it for five minutes but if he chooses to interact he only has that one moment before the freeze ends and time starts again. His daily limit for this is factored by his stamina, if he were running all day his ability would give him only 5 seconds or less. His ability also allows him to pause time around one person nearest tim him but only for ten seconds. The person he freezes is also encased in a impenetrable shell untill the ten seconds are up.  The dowside to his abilities is that imediatly after he exits the freeze he is hit with a painfull headache, if he were to try and go past the five minute limit he currently has he will also get temporary blindness to go with the headache and ear-ringing. 

The Mirror Room

xx Face Claim

Kirito from SAO

xx Appearance

Shadow stands at 5'11 weighing in at 185 pounds with jet black hair thats somewhat long and unkept. He wears mostly black clothes as well as a black jacket and his sword sheath along his back. His eyes are a soft brown amd his skin a faint tan. His body type is mostly muscle hardly any fat and is lean. He has the look that he is constantly scanning his surroundings and his eyes can be seen as almost blood red in certain lighting. His clothes are made of fine leather and clothe made to be durable and comfortable, his swords sheath uses three straps to hold itself to him connecting a custom metal plate for him.

Open and Public

xx Personality

He loves to hang out with friends and people hes just met.Granted they are met while on his free time. He has high people skills and know and understands peoples natures and how and what drives people to do things and act certin ways. He is laid back and has a long fuse that comes with patence as well.Shadow is also headstrong and openminded (oxymoron yes i know) and his better quality is that he can think out of the box and think of things other wouldnt normaly thing of.He is also very loyal and lives by the code of honor when it come to his fellow man(and wemonlol). The only real kink in his personality is that he once his fuse is wittled down he will explode with a force to be recconed with due to the fact he bottles up and tosses all negativity he enteracts with into his subconcous. He will also sacrafice personal time and energy to help those in need because he cares more for others than himself when the need arises.

The Secret Side of Me

xx Greatest Secret

his kill count

xx Greatest Fear

being weak and powerless to help others

xx Greatest Desire

to be able to see a peacefull world and control time fully

This is His-story

xx History

ShadowFang was born into a family of knights under the name of the Fangknights  each one possessing the name of fang and the name of the element they are trained under. Shadow's father was taught under the element of earth so he was given the name EarthFang he was trained to use the earth to his advantage. One day he was given the blessing of time by Dialga and he used his ability to fight for his kingdom. Later down the road EarthFang settled down with a woman by the name of Katherine Hail and they had a child together and he grew up as the was given the name ShadowFang.

ShadowFang grew up learning skills from his father and learning to use his abilities that he had gained from his father and found out the penalty for going over his limit quickly. He was also told of how it is that his family became knights for the Crystal kingdom. A long time ago before any of his people had set sights of the surounding kingdoms they were a for the most part peaceful people. They were able to be self sufficient and were able to keep their kingdom a secret for the longest time and the only threat they had were the creatures and monsters beneath the surface and as time went by special families that had gained a talent for fighting were put up as the front lines and the high knights of the kingdom. Each family possessed a name and the one the shadow cam from was the fang because they ripped through enemies like a ferocious fang creatures. As time went on things stayed the same for a while until a major earthquake hit the kingdom causing the earth above and below to crumble destroying the entire land. EarthFang was one of the ones helping the people escape the falling kingdom and as they were getting away the tunnel they were in started to crumble above them and fall over them until they froze in mid-air as Earthfang went to try and shield the ones he could and was visited by Dialga and was told he was given the gift of control over time and was to use it for good. Dialga soon left and the people with EarthFang were given time to escape the rocks and enter the surface world. They camped out and waited for other but only a few survived the destruction. They then decided to split into groups to find new homes and to better allow the chance for their people to live and grow again. During their journey they were approached by knights of Crystal kingdom, they were brought to the  King and were given the choice to be a part of the kingdom and serve or those that knew magic would die. They of course chose to stay and the knights were put into the kingdoms army and some went up in rank like the few of the families like Shadow's family known as fangknights.

Shadow grew up being trained to use shadow to his advantage and learned to use thepower given to him through his father. He trained to be one of the best swordsmen in the knights and only using his power if tee was no other choice or to train with his father. He went up in the ranks quickly despite his age but only high enough to be important but still have time for his family. He heard through the ranks of there being a inescapable prison not too far away from the kingdom and its location. Hearing this he was curious and decided that on his free time not doing his duty or with family and training he would sit and watch the area for the chace to see if anyone would ever escape. One night while he was off duty he saw a form running like a bat out of hell from what looked like the earth and he got excited and followed the form the best he could and soon made it his personal quest to find this person and find out why they were imprisoned. 

 

xx OOC Name

Justin Micheal James Hunter of the proud Gunter lineiage! (dont ask about the name -.-)

xx Other Characters

nada

Bio form by ♠spade♠

[LightTogekiss]

Accepted Comments!

So the bio looks great, and the abilities that you were so worried about look okay to me. It's a little bit confusing exactly what his ability does, but I think it is okay. Also, for his society/group, saying Justice is very vague and it doesn't really explain what you mean(Especially since he hasn't met Justice yet). You could make it "follower of Justice" since that is true(In a very literal sense), but saying just Justice is a bit too general. Also, take the WIP out of the title, please, and change your name to Shadowfang or Shadow so we can know who you are posting as.

The personality and appearance look good, and the history looks fine, but I would be careful next time on how you arrange your history. Because, at the beginning, you apparently give a statement about EarthFang getting his abilities and then having Shadowfang, but later, you reference him getting the abilities and the story involved, which makes it confusing to the reader as it would seem he got the abilities again.

Also, for the next bio, I would recommend that you check very carefully for grammar and spelling errors, and just plain typos, as there are more than a dozen of them sprinkled throughout the bio; they aren't enough to make it unreadable, but it is enough to make me notice it. Of course I understand having to type everything I do out on a kindle, but still, in a future bio, try to be more careful.

Anyway, enough criticism. I love the character and I can't wait to see his story unfold. Welcome to Perish Song!

Edit:Sorry, I didn't realize you had already taken out the WIP after I started posting.(It was there when you announced he was finished.)

Edit number two: Please add shadowfang's name in the proper section of the bio above the image.

Notes from Light.